tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post3055594852630357272..comments2023-09-23T12:13:10.019+00:00Comments on December Quinn, Erotic Romance<br>Stacia Kane, Sexy Urban Fantasy: Be a sex-writing strumpet: AfterglowStaciahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07969399927758009095noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-88930142087453012412009-02-23T04:30:00.000+00:002009-02-23T04:30:00.000+00:00Thanks! I've been following this and it was a gian...Thanks! I've been following this and it was a giant help.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-50434408774118597902009-02-23T04:29:00.000+00:002009-02-23T04:29:00.000+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-69112393439319411432008-09-18T13:34:00.000+00:002008-09-18T13:34:00.000+00:00I agree about the "nasty" minded speculators. The...I agree about the "nasty" minded speculators. There sure are a lot of them out there, though.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-66988183843662291082008-09-17T21:32:00.000+00:002008-09-17T21:32:00.000+00:00Thank you everyone! I really appreciate the commen...Thank you everyone! I really appreciate the comments and all the feedback and everything. Writing the series was fun but wouldn't have been anywhere near as fun if you guys hadn't been playing along and leaving comments and participating in everything.<BR/><BR/>You're welcome, Renee! Good luck! :-)Staciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07969399927758009095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-27611599409143184552008-09-17T17:45:00.000+00:002008-09-17T17:45:00.000+00:00Hi December/Stacia. I just wanted to thank you for...Hi December/Stacia. I just wanted to thank you for the kind words and excellent ideas you gave me on Evil Editor. I really appreciate it. With any luck, I should be sending off a better version to agents by the end of the month. So, thank you!<BR/><BR/>Great blog, btw. :)Renee Collinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08170818341212519937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-17981448368819981732008-09-17T15:19:00.000+00:002008-09-17T15:19:00.000+00:00Well, first off I was delighted to learn of your u...Well, first off I was delighted to learn of your unabashed affection for the word "cock"--a word I, too, am inordinately fond of, LOL.<BR/><BR/>And it's nice to find an author out there who's willing to admit that arousing the reader is one of the points of a sex scene. You'd be amazed how many writers claim that never enters into it. :D<BR/><BR/>Sexy word choices was one of my favorite parts. And foreplay, of course...kirsten saellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778076783406073225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-91628911565311916572008-09-17T13:15:00.000+00:002008-09-17T13:15:00.000+00:00One thing I learned was to spread out scenes, go i...One thing I learned was to spread out scenes, go into detail - very useful for a keep clipping along type like me.<BR/>And I think elements of your advice could apply to other action scenes - not just sex scenes - as well.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-24319840325853004792008-09-17T13:09:00.000+00:002008-09-17T13:09:00.000+00:00You really do rock. I'm editing that damn novel no...You really do rock. <BR/><BR/>I'm editing that damn novel now, and this has really helped me to see what needs to be fixed. I'm looking forward to writing a much cleaner draft next time. <BR/><BR/>Thanks.Seeley deBornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02692166883821777947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-7055947453904339112008-09-17T12:59:00.000+00:002008-09-17T12:59:00.000+00:00Your covering of word usage, ingredients and mecha...Your covering of word usage, ingredients and mechanics were my favorite parts. Even in toned down sexual situations, those guides hold true. It was a wonderful series of instructional posts. I appreciate you taking the time to do it, and I doubt if it could have been done better by anyone.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19623437.post-12262427839792812402008-09-17T12:44:00.000+00:002008-09-17T12:44:00.000+00:00So, you asked for comments. :-)First off, then, a...So, you asked for comments. :-)<BR/><BR/>First off, then, a big Thank You for this series. I don't write sex (or, at least, I've never had occasion to so far) but so much of the advice applies to writing generally that it's been hugely fun and enlightening to read. I think seeing the advice in a specific context (i.e. the sex scene) and dissecting that particular relationship has made some points come clearer to me in general.<BR/><BR/>If you do intend to add to the series, I'll await updates with interest.Solidushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01942352297819203368noreply@blogger.com